Most books begin with an introduction before moving into the detailed chapters. The introduction prepares the reader for the journey ahead by explaining what the book is about, why the subject matters and what the reader can expect.
A book introduction is usually between one and three pages long, depending on the nature and length of the book. It should be clear, engaging and purposeful. Its role is not to explain everything in detail, but to give the reader enough understanding and motivation to continue.
1. Use Your Book Outline
Your book outline should guide the development of your introduction.
Review the main themes, chapter topics and purpose of the book. Identify the ideas the reader needs to understand before beginning Chapter One.
Ask yourself:
- What is the central message of this book?
- Why did I write it?
- What problem or need does it address?
- What should the reader expect from the chapters ahead?
Your introduction should reflect the direction of the entire book without giving away every detail.
2. Hook the Reader from the Beginning
The first paragraph should capture the reader’s attention.
You may begin with:
- a personal story;
- an interesting experience;
- a surprising fact;
- a thought-provoking question;
- a short illustration;
- a striking statement; or
- a light, relevant moment of humour.
The opening should connect naturally to the subject of the book. Avoid using an interesting story that has little to do with the message simply because it sounds exciting.
A strong hook makes the reader think, “This book understands what I am facing. I need to keep reading.”
3. Present the Main Message and Purpose
After the opening paragraph, introduce the general message of the book.
Explain:
- what the book is about;
- why the subject is important;
- what motivated you to write it; and
- what the reader may gain from reading it.
The purpose should be stated clearly. The reader should not have to reach Chapter Five before discovering why the book exists.
For example:
This book was written to help single parents rebuild their lives, strengthen their families and move forward with hope, wisdom and practical guidance.
Avoid making exaggerated promises. Your introduction should inspire confidence without claiming that the book will solve every problem in the reader’s life.
4. Identify the Intended Reader
Explain who the book is written for.
Describe the reader in a way that helps them recognise themselves in your words. You may mention their circumstances, questions, struggles, desires or goals.
For example:
This book is for the mother who is suddenly raising her children alone, the father learning to manage parenting responsibilities without a partner, and the single parent who is determined to rebuild despite disappointment, grief or uncertainty.
Address the reader’s pain points with compassion. Do not make them feel judged, exposed or reduced to a problem that needs fixing.
You may also mention who else may benefit from the book, but keep the primary audience clear.
5. Give a Brief Overview of the Book
Provide a simple preview of what the book will cover.
You do not need to describe every chapter in detail. A short paragraph may be enough to show the progression of the message.
For example:
In the chapters ahead, we will examine how single parenthood may begin, how to develop a practical plan for recovery and how to rebuild emotional, financial, spiritual and family stability. We will also explore what it means to move beyond survival and begin flourishing again.
This overview helps the reader understand how the chapters fit together.
6. Lead the Reader into Chapter One
The final paragraph of the introduction should create a smooth transition into the first chapter.
Avoid ending abruptly or introducing a completely unrelated thought. Instead, guide the reader towards the first subject the book will address.
For example:
Before we can begin rebuilding, we must first understand where we are and how we arrived here. That is where our journey begins.
This prepares the reader naturally for a first chapter titled, How Did I Get Here?
7. Depend on the Holy Spirit
As a Christian writer, do not develop your introduction through skill and planning alone.
Pray and ask the Holy Spirit to help you understand:
- what the reader needs to hear first;
- which story or illustration to use;
- what tone will communicate grace and truth;
- what should be included or removed; and
- how to prepare the reader for the message God has placed in the book.
Pray, ask, meditate, listen and then begin writing.
Depending on the Holy Spirit does not mean waiting indefinitely for the perfect sentence to appear. Begin with what you understand, remain attentive to His guidance and refine the introduction as the book develops.
How Different Books Introduce Their Message
A strong introduction prepares the reader for the journey ahead. It may begin with a personal experience, a defining conversation, a central struggle, a question, or a confession that leads naturally into the purpose of the book.
Back on My Feet
Beginning With the Reader’s Struggle
Finding myself on my own as a single mum was not an easy transition; it did not matter the circumstances behind my status or what hardships or mistakes led me to my position in life.
In many circumstances, life weighs down single dads and mums as they work hard to manage the responsibilities of single parenthood while trying to make ends meet.
Fortunately, God does not give up on us. He has identified us as His own by placing the Holy Spirit in our hearts as the first instalment that guarantees everything He has promised us.
It is He who has placed His seal upon us and given us the Holy Spirit as a pledge of the fulfilment of His promise.
2 Corinthians 1:22This means that God is watching over us in every situation. His promises are real, and He remains faithful to fulfil them.
It immediately identifies the reader’s pain and allows the author to establish a personal connection with single parents. It then introduces the book’s faith foundation by moving from hardship to God’s presence, promises and hope.
Jesus Killed My Business
Beginning With a Defining Conversation
“I want you to close your business and join your husband in ministry work,” God’s voice said.
“But Lord, You gave me this business, and You made me successful in it,” I countered.
“Besides, the provision it brings releases my husband to serve You wholly without worrying about his family,” I continued in my counter-argument.
Oftentimes, when God gives a person instructions to guide them through life, they counter-argue because human beings are constantly battling for control. This was my situation in my early thirties.
Looking back, I see my life’s pattern in the life of Jacob. He, too, wrestled with God for control and tried to manipulate his circumstances.
I wrote this book to encourage believers to let go of their need for control and surrender to God’s plan.
It opens in the middle of a tense conversation, immediately creating curiosity. The author’s resistance introduces the book’s central conflict: the struggle between personal control and surrendering to God’s purpose.
Too Busy for Worship
Beginning With a Question and a Confession
Are You Working or Toiling?
I must confess: I am a recovering workaholic. In previous seasons of my life, this trait seemed quite endearing, and many praised me for how hard I often worked.
I soaked in that glory, deceitfully describing it as burning the midnight oil, while drawing from the parable of the ten virgins in Matthew 25:1–13.
As I grow deeper in my walk with God and get older, I have come to appreciate the difference between diligently going about my Father’s business and being too busy to be effective.
My husband and I have shared a favourite Scripture for over a decade. We call it our rest Scripture. It is found in Hebrews 4 and speaks about entering God’s rest.
This Scripture has become my anchor. Whenever my boat begins to drift farther from the shores of God’s rest, God reminds me of Hebrews 4.
It begins with a reflective question and follows it with an honest confession. The author does not present herself as someone who has always mastered the subject. Instead, she writes as a person who is still learning, growing and recovering. This creates trust and makes the reader more willing to examine their own habits.
There Is More Than One Way to Begin a Book
Back on My Feet begins with the reader’s struggle, Jesus Killed My Business begins with a defining conversation, and Too Busy for Worship begins with a question and a personal confession. Each approach is different, but every introduction leads the reader towards the book’s central message.
A Simple Introduction Structure
You may use this structure to organise your book introduction clearly and lead the reader naturally into Chapter One.
Keep the Introduction Focused
Do not turn the introduction into another full chapter. Its purpose is to prepare the reader for the book, establish the direction of the message and create interest in what follows.
Avoid:
- Giving too much background information.
- Repeating the entire table of contents.
- Using several unrelated stories.
- Explaining every lesson in advance.
- Making unrealistic promises.
- Writing a long autobiography unless it directly supports the book’s purpose.
Write an Introduction That Welcomes the Reader
A strong introduction captures attention, explains the book’s message and purpose, identifies the intended reader, and leads naturally into Chapter One.
By the end of this activity, you will have planned and drafted an introduction of between 500 and 900 words that clearly prepares the reader for the journey ahead.
Understand the Six Main Parts
Opening Hook
Begin with a story, question, fact or statement that captures attention.
The Book’s Main Message
Explain what the book is about and why the subject matters.
The Purpose
State why you wrote the book and what you hope it will accomplish.
The Intended Reader
Describe whom the book is for and the needs it addresses.
A Brief Overview
Show what the reader will encounter in the chapters ahead.
Transition to Chapter One
End with a sentence or paragraph that leads naturally into the first chapter.
Prepare the Content of Your Introduction
Write brief notes first. These answers will make the full draft easier to write and will help you avoid repeating information.
Draft Your Introduction
Write between 500 and 900 words. Use the planning notes above, but keep the final draft natural, connected and welcoming.
Review Your Introduction
Opens the door, welcomes the reader and shows them why the journey ahead is worth taking.
Save Your Work
Copy the introduction draft or download the completed worksheet.
Training by: Dr. Muthoni Mercy Omukhango
Dr. Muthoni Mercy Omukhango is a Christian publisher, author, trainer, and marketplace minister. She serves as National Director of CLC Kenya, Authors’ Manager at the African Christian Authors Book Award (ACABA), Convener of Mama Africa Book Box, and Patron of CLC Kids and Teens.
Through the Publishing in Africa Series, she equips authors, publishers, and literary entrepreneurs with practical strategies for developing, publishing, distributing, and growing African-authored literature.
Her ministry is centred on advancing God’s Kingdom through literature and helping more African voices to be written, published, distributed, and read.
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